Wilderkiin - A race I made

[DraconicFury]

WILDERKIIN
Almost human in appearance, the Wilderkiin are fast, strong beings of the jungle.
RACIAL TRAITS
Average height: 5’7 – 6’2
Average weight: 135 – 215lb
ABILITY SCORES: +2 Dexterity, +2 Constitution
SIZE: Medium
SPEED: 6 squares
VISION: Normal

LANGUAGES: Common, choice of one other
SKILL BONUSES: +2 Nature, +2 Acrobatics
NATURAL CAMOFLAGE: +3 stealth when hiding amongst trees
FOCUSED SPEED: You can use ‘Focused speed’ as a daily power

Focused speed Wilderkiin racial power You focus all of your energy into your speed Daily,
,Standard action, Personal,
Special: You must not be bloodied to use this power. The effect ends when you are bloodied.
Effect: Until the end of the encounter, you gain +2 to your speed. You also gain +2 acrobatics until the end of your turn.

As people of the jungle, Wilderkiin have evolved to be fast and agile, jumping and climbing from one tree to the other. Their cities are amongst the leaves of the trees, far above the danger of the creatures below.

Play a Wilderkiin if you want…
To be agile and tough
To be a member of race that favours the fighter, rogue and druid classes
To overcome obstacles with ease

PHYSICAL QUALITIES:
Wilderkiin are well built and fast. Their skin colour is mostly almost pale, with unique pale green stripes over their body. Each Wilderkiin has unique stripes. They are similar in appearance to humans, with the same facial structure. They are slightly taller than humans. Their eyes have varied colours including dark green, light green, bright yellow, and crimson. Wilderkiin can live up to an average of 130 years, but never look old; they grow to adults at the same speed as humans, but after that they can stay looking young for many years

PLAYING A WILDERKIIN:
Wilderkiin are courageous and often face very dangerous situations, especially if accomplishment results in treasure or glory. Many are keen adventurers, and leave the safe confines of their huts to prove themselves at about 16 years old. They take pride in their acrobatic skills, and aren’t modest at all. They take time to enjoy scenery and love exploration.
The Wilderkiin are all descended from members of the great city of Wildergaard, founded many centuries ago by the first Wilderkiin tribes. Legend says that the first Wilderkiin were born from the sap of jungle trees, to serve as guardians of the jungle.

WILDERKIIN CHARECTERISTICS: Quick, agile, proud, brave, rushed, humorous
MALE NAMES: Eldyn, Etryl, Gildyn, Kentrys, Melrys, Reldyn, Wildyn
FEMALE NAMES: Elerwyn, Gwyn, Kwyn, Lenerwyl, Starlyn, Trynly, Vyn

WILDERKIIN ADVENTURERS:
3 examples of Wilderkiin adventurers are described below:
Wildyn is a Wilderkiin druid who can transform into a tiger. At the age of 19, Wylden’s home was destroyed in a terrible fire. His home was destroyed along with his whole village and most of the villagers too. With no relatives left to get help from, Wildyn left with his friend and began adventuring, to gain back all of his lost wealth. Wildyn is still an adventurer, but he and his friend have gone separate ways.
Trynly is a Wilderkiin rogue. She comes from a long blood-line of deadly assassins, but she vows only to use her skills for good. Banished from the assassin’s village, Trynly uses her stealth and cunning to navigate dungeons and defeat mighty foes.
Reldyn is a Wilderkiin fighter. He lived as a warrior in training in a secluded tree top village. He left home at 17 and decided to use his fighting skills to slice through enemies, in search for treasure.



For use with Dungeons and Dragons 4th edition – Race created by Lucas Payne

Please tell me what you think, or if theres any flaws I should fix!
It is for use with my campaign but you are free to use it.

[GawainBS]

Not a flaw, but the latter generation of 4E races has one fixed bonus to attributes, and then a choice. In your case: +2 DEX and +2 STR OR CON, for example.

[Bluestorm]

Ok not upto date with 4th edition but what about a negative to a ability or something just that i don't see a weakness to play this race

[GawainBS]

Ok not upto date with 4th edition but what about a negative to a ability or something just that i don't see a weakness to play this race

4E doesn't work that way. The race as presented follow a pretty basic set up, which all the races share. If anything, it's weak. Its power should be Encounter, I think.