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My Five-Hour Love Affair

Anything goes... just keep it clean.
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friend_al_23
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My Five-Hour Love Affair

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Will you comment on this article. Probably check some grammar and stuff too. Thanks.
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Was that it? "Monthly transfer limit exceeded."
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Oh my gosh. Thanks for pointing that out. That's not the URL really. I just forgot to put the link. Anyway, here's the article:
[url="http://www.geocities.com/friend_al_23/Dataline/mfhla.html"]http://www.geocities.com/friend_al_23/Dataline/mfhla.html[/url]
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Whats with the soft porn? :D
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First of all, I didn't write that. Second, the article will be publish in our school journal / newspaper called Dataline and I need to correct those errors, typos, maybe even how the sentence is suppose or do you thik it should be re-written. So I would appreciate if you could help me out. I have others here but I don't want you people doing my job unless that's okay with you. :D
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