My Five-Hour Love Affair
- friend_al_23
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My Five-Hour Love Affair
Will you comment on this article. Probably check some grammar and stuff too. Thanks.
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First of all, I didn't write that. Second, the article will be publish in our school journal / newspaper called Dataline and I need to correct those errors, typos, maybe even how the sentence is suppose or do you thik it should be re-written. So I would appreciate if you could help me out. I have others here but I don't want you people doing my job unless that's okay with you. 
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