Athkatla III(?)

Aegis · Post by **Aegis** » Mon Jan 07, 2002 12:29 pm

@Craig: In response to your PM, This one wont actually involve Magus in anyway (character wise). So, if you really feel like being in Athkatla while the rest scour Icewind Dale, Deserts of Calimshan, or the forests of Cormyr, I recommend rethinking...

Magus · Post by **Magus** » Mon Jan 07, 2002 2:40 pm

@craig: As fun as it is playing Magus, I'd like to play a slightly less experienced character

Plus I think we've all had enough of omnipotently powerful mages for one story (make that two stories

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Craig · Post by **Craig** » Mon Jan 07, 2002 2:52 pm

Hmm doesn't mean i can't vist him!

Magus · Post by **Magus** » Mon Jan 07, 2002 3:26 pm

@craig: I think the ending to Athkatla II will particularly interest you then...(smiles enigmatically)

Craig · Post by **Craig** » Tue Jan 08, 2002 11:13 am

Durwyn · Post by **Durwyn** » Mon Feb 18, 2002 7:45 pm

I would like to make a charcter in this story. (Athkalta 2 was cool)

Magus · Post by **Magus** » Mon Feb 18, 2002 8:51 pm

@Durwyn: That'd be great. Aegis will be DM'ing, so you should check with him. Anyway, out of curiosity, how much of Athkatla II did you read?

BTW, you might want to keep an eye on the Audition thread. We seem to be talking about the upcoming story in both topics.

Aegis · Post by **Aegis** » Mon Feb 18, 2002 9:02 pm

The more the merrier. Hell, we might even be able to start soon, if Magus gets in gear. (

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Magus · Post by **Magus** » Tue Feb 19, 2002 12:13 am

Consider it done. The climax is all finished. Now we'll just have to see how long the conclusion takes...

At the current rate, we'll be done in no time...no more than a couple of months, if all goes well

Durwyn · Post by **Durwyn** » Tue Feb 19, 2002 7:08 am

I've read up to page 30 i believe.

Magus · Post by **Magus** » Tue Feb 19, 2002 4:41 pm

30 pages? I've never gotten a real second opinion of the story, aside from the participants. My own parents are too 'busy' to sit down and give it a shot

Could you provide some criticism? What about it do you think is particulary good? What do think needs some improvement?

I apologize ahead of time if I'm imposing. It's just frustrating sometimes to have so little feedback

Aegis · Post by **Aegis** » Tue Feb 19, 2002 8:50 pm

Originally posted by Magus
30 pages? I've never gotten a real second opinion of the story, aside from the participants. My own parents are too 'busy' to sit down and give it a shot Could you provide some criticism? What about it do you think is particulary good? What do think needs some improvement?

I apologize ahead of time if I'm imposing. It's just frustrating sometimes to have so little feedback

You know, Magus, your not the only putting into the story. What about my editting, and contributions, and Rail's, and Xandax', Fas's and everyone else contributions.

Nippy · Post by **Nippy** » Wed Feb 20, 2002 1:14 am

Originally posted by Magus
30 pages? I've never gotten a real second opinion of the story, aside from the participants. My own parents are too 'busy' to sit down and give it a shot Could you provide some criticism? What about it do you think is particulary good? What do think needs some improvement?

I apologize ahead of time if I'm imposing. It's just frustrating sometimes to have so little feedback

I have read all of it including Athkatla one...

Magus · Post by **Magus** » Wed Feb 20, 2002 6:03 am

Originally posted by Aegis
You know, Magus, your not the only putting into the story. What about my editting, and contributions, and Rail's, and Xandax', Fas's and everyone else contributions.

Whoa...where did I imply otherwise?

I'm not just referring to the parts I wrote, but the story as a whole. We can all improve our writing with a little constructive criticism

Aegis · Post by **Aegis** » Wed Feb 20, 2002 4:15 pm

Nah, I'm just twisting ya Magus.

Rail · Post by **Rail** » Wed Feb 20, 2002 4:30 pm

Originally posted by Aegis
Nah, I'm just twisting ya Magus.

Hmmmmmmm...

And I called Magus evil?!? Go figure!

Magus · Post by **Magus** » Wed Feb 20, 2002 4:52 pm

Originally posted by Nippy

I have read all of it including Athkatla one...

Wow...that's a lot of reading

Care to share your thoughts?

Originally posted by Aegis
Nah, I'm just twisting ya Magus.

As for you...

Craig · Post by **Craig** » Wed Feb 20, 2002 5:15 pm

I wonder if someone if some one could tell me where Athkatla 1 came from i mean whats the begining?

Magus · Post by **Magus** » Wed Feb 20, 2002 5:29 pm

You mean Roleplaying in Athkatla? What do you mean, "where did it come from"? (confused)

Aegis · Post by **Aegis** » Wed Feb 20, 2002 8:09 pm

Well, before Magus, Rail and I got a hold of the reigns, it was the twisted image of Ubik, Omar, Wankerly, and Weasel.