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Well Mysteria posted a story, and I have one two if you are interested, this is a work in progress and I want to write a lot. Tell me what you think and I'll carry on if you like it.

Chapter 1

Davion strode out onto the sand. He kicked off his sandals and knelt on the coarse surface. He prayed for deliverance and that should he fall his spirit would be accepted into the Halls of the Victors.

He drew his sword, only a small weapon unlike his normal greatsword. Arena combat needed speed instead of brute strength. He rubbed against the coarse linen around his stomach, put there to stop the entrails from escaping. The light from the chandeliers faded, the assassin entered, this man had a mark against Davion’s employer, and a failed contract had forced Crason to dual Davion. A horrid business yet Davion had no choice, he had killed Crason’s partner, his brother, and naturally he demanded justice.

“What an odd society we live in,” thought Davion. “A murderer can demand a death dual and yet a simple thief will be hanged for stealing an apple to provide for his family. Still, the laws of society must be followed…”

Crason entered the arena with cheers from the crowd, he rallied support wherever he went, a charismatic person like he could succeed in society.

Crason glared at Davion, he held no fear in his eyes, merely a cold steely glare, Davion looked away, the dual could really only have result, and it would mean death for the other person, no hard feelings after.

The pit master called the Djinn bodyguard to ring the gong for silence, he boomed outwards with a powerful voice.

“Welcome, friends to the feature match tonight! Already we have had three gladiator deaths and a surprise victory for Hendak against a troll, where oh where did he get that acid from?” Grinned Lethinan, “Oh come now, Gloria, surely you can tell me?” A horrible, contorted smile found some way from escaping Lethinan’s lips. A thug appeared from the shadows of a doorway dragging a girl by a torn blouse. She was sobbing with red welt marks scattered on her face. In the nearby cells a blonde haired man roared in anguish, he started shaking the bars, like he was in a rage. Davion was familiar with a rage; after all, he had trained to release himself in combat like that.

Davion looked on in horror as the girl was dragged before Lethinan, he unsheathed a small dagger from his belt and was about to strike down on the poor serving girl before Davion cried out.

“My lord! A word if I may” The crowd booed and hissed, they had lost the opportunity for blood to be spilled.

“As you know, the victor of this fight would win any object of his desire, I wish to change my prize, and I want the girl to be freed and her servitude given to me.”

The crowd became agitated, they wanted blood.

Lethinan demanded silence again.

“By the Gods man why would you want this, this wench? She is nothing!”

“My reasons are my own my lord, is my request granted?”

“Get on with it man, I want this fight over!” cried Crason.

“Well, if you want it that bad then you will have to make a sacrifice, you have a choice, you fight with one arm or you fight blind.” He brandished a thick piece of black cord.

“I fight with one arm.”

“Oh a ****y one is it! Well then you shall have it as you wish! Tie him up!

Another thug appeared, he gruffly tied Davion’s left arm and left again.

“Let battle commence!”

The brass gong rung and Crason closed in quickly looking for a quick kill; his eyes gleamed with cold, murderous intent. He lunged at Davion, hoping to pierce a lung quickly. Davion was unused to the constriction of one arm and could not dodge quickly enough; his left shoulder was knicked by the blade. He quickly round housed and kicked the feet out from under the assassin and only just a missed a decapitating cut when Crason rolled out of the way. Davion’s wound began to burn; he risked a look at it and noticed a festering cut. Crason had poisoned his weapon! Davion turned and faced Crason; his dark face was smirking at Davion.

“You like my little surprise?” Grinned Crason.

The wound was murderously painful, it burned like hellfire and Davion’s brow began to burn, the poison was getting into his immune system, he calmed himself. He needed the rage now.

Often people presumed that the rage was only something that gave you strength, it was often the most conscious choice yet Davion had gone on a different path, he required more control, better reflexes and a faster, cooler mind.

He worked into that state, found a cool spot and let his hours of training do the work for him, he attained the state of mind just as Crason lunged again.

With his new state of mind Davion deftly leapt backwards out of the lunge. He brought his sword up and parried a cross-slash from Crason and committed a lethal disembowelling lunge himself. He missed by a half an inch.

Crason began to worry now, he had not anticipated this, he struggled to even repel Davion’s thrust let alone attack, his mind drifted back to the night before…

They were running back from the mark when they met a figure in the alley, unknown to them it was Davion, they charged at him and he killed his brother, he was dead! A dark, overpowering rage came to him. A voice whispered in his mind.

“We can get him you know, I can give you your brother back and you can get your vengeance…”

“Cyric… Cyric, is that you? Have you answered me?”

“All you have to do is die…”

The voice faded from Crason’s mind.

He came back to the fight and saw the lunge, it was too late, Davion had pierced the lung.

The blood bubbled up his throat; he coughed and hacked blood onto the floor. He fell onto his knees, his vision faded, he felt his last breath came and Cyric’s dark smile was the last thing that Crason saw. He died on the floor of the pit.

Davion walked up to the banister where the Gloria was being held, Lethinan looked at Davion with disgust and walked off. Davion slumped to his knees; the poison was more powerful than he had thought.

Gloria helped him to his changing area and locked the door. She looked out of the bars in the door and knelt down beside Davion, she began to chant a spell…





Chapter 2

His vision flickered, the burning was still present but not as painful as it once was. He opened his eyes a little and found himself in his quarters in his master’s estate. Gloria was sitting in a chair near his bed with a small plate of food and a deep cup of water. He stirred and reached for the cup, his left arm tried to rise but a great deal of pain erupted in his muscles. He winced in pain and drew in a sharp breath of air. Gloria stirred and held the cup to Davion’s lips, his throat was incredibly parched and the water was like the discovery of an oasis in the harshest desert.

“Gloria, what happened? I remember nearly nothing…”

“I took you back to the changing room, Crason’s poison was quite lethal. I’m sure it was created by a Talonan priestess, quite dangerous. When I had made a few unsuccessful attempts at a normal healing I had to use a spell to remove the whole blood flow in your arm, the toxin was spreading too quickly and I needed to stop it. After I stopped the flow of blood I traced the poison and removed it, here’s a vial of the stuff, a keepsake if you like…”

“But how? Surely if you could cast all those spells you must be a very powerful cleric…”

“Well you could say that. I worship Tempus, you are aware of him?”

“Of course! I worship him too, when I die he will take my soul to the Hall of Victors.”

“Yes, that’s it. The reason I can cast those spells is because of this piece of metal.”

She held out a thin sliver of metal inside a pendant, encased inside forever.

“This a small part of Tempus’ blade. He gave it to me after my parents died…”

Her voice faded and her eyes looked downcast, she gripped the necklace until her knuckles went white, she looked up and her eyes burned with passion of loss and hatred.

“I was on a quest to get vengeance for my family, I travelled south through Baldurs Gate and was caught by some bandits. They sold me into slavery and I ended up here. There was nothing I could do, they took my necklace away for me yet Tempus’ blessing’s must be many for after I left each place of servitude my necklace went with me. I kept this hidden up until now, you and Hendak are the only people in Athkatla who know about my necklace. You saved me and now I shall serve you, my first act was to heal you. Do you require anything else master?”

Her eyes had a forlorn look, she was downcast again. Davion smiled at her.

“Do not call me master, I despise that term, in any case you are not my slave. My prize was your freedom, as such you are free.”

Her eyes shot up.

“You are freeing me? Are you serious? You are letting me go?”

“Of course, I ask a few things of you though. Who is Hendak? The Gladiator you helped?”

“Yes… yes, Hendak did help me. He stopped me from getting beaten. He helped me to survive in that Godforsaken place.”

“Another thing, how old are you?”

“I am 19 summers old Davion, do you mind me calling you that, Davion?”

“Of course not, it is my name after all! Have you met my employer yet, Sir Connavar?”

“Indeed I have, he is a truly honourable gentlemen.”
“Yes, yes he is. Have you anywhere to stay? It’s just that I think Connavar might like to employ you. He is looking for a healer in his ward room. He operates a free healing clinic along with the Ilmaterians and they need help, many ill people come in a day, they are overworked but any worker is provided a room and 3 gold pieces a week wage.”

”Three pieces! How can he afford it? That is a huge amount of money!”

“Well he was actually part of a group that explored a dungeon and they returned with many gold pieces. He invested his money and his funds soared. He is happily married and wants for nothing. He is actually a high Paladin for Order of the Radiant Heart and I am head guard for his lands.”

“Well thank you for helping me out of that I will speak to Connavar about the job and maybe I’ll get it.” The welt marks had gone from her face, she looked incredibly pretty and Davion’s heart soared when he saw her smile.

“Aye, I will see you soon Gloria. Good bye for now!”

Chapter 3

There was a new entrance into Cyric’s shadowy layer. Atop his throne Cyric smiled, flashing teeth whiter than the snow of the Spine of the World.

“You have come I see,” he said to Crason. Suddenly his face turned into a snarl.

“Not only did you fail in your attempt at assassination, you also failed in fighting that brute! A simple and easy fight! I even gave you my strongest poison! Poison formulated from Bhall’s slayer form I took that myself, that should have given you the edge! You even had the gall to use it in that fight! But no, you failed and now I am the laughing stock of the pantheon.”

Out of the shadows came a figure garbed in a cloak that was blacker than the sky at night, he came up beside Cyric’s throne and whispered in his ear.

Suddenly he flashed that smile again.

“It seems you are lucky! Spies in Tempus’ court tell me that he became involved in that fight too.”

Crason looked up at his master, his cloak covered his face but Cyric looked at him, looked at him in the depth of his eyes and he was almost burning because of it.

“I give you one more chance. This is your chance to repay the debts you owe me, and then some. Succeed, and you have a place in my court, you will become one of my chosen assassins. Fail, and well let me show you…”

Cyric waved his hand a small, clouded window appeared in front of Crason. It slowly demisted and Crason saw a scene that horrified him. Thousands of assassins before Crason were being tortured eternally. Fire, ice and acid, beatings and punishment availed his senses. He had to look away; he could almost smell the flesh being burned.

Cyric laughed at this.

“You have seen death before! Why is now different? Why is this affecting you?”

Crason uttered his first words.

“Master, I am only human, this, this treatment is not even given dogs!”

“Perhaps,” mused Cyric, “but it is most… effective…”

He grinned again and waved his hand at the window closing it.

“Seeing as you were incapable before, I give you these gifts.”

A trunk appeared in front of Crason, the lid flew open and Crason approached a magnificent suit of black leather armour, there was a cloak similar to the one worn by Cyric’s aide and a short sword. The blade was black and the edge keener than any sword made by human hands. The hilt was rapped in gilt gold and a black pommel stone was encased in it.

“A most interesting weapon don’t you agree? It is borrowed from Mask himself; do see it is returned. And one final gift to you, I give you the service of your brother again, and some of my most faithful allies in the material plane.”

Five figures walked out of the darkness, his brother among them,

“I give you Viran the Sorcerer, a most evil and malicious sort he has a tendency to overpower his fireballs.”

Viran muttered a few words and the largest ball of fire Crason had seen launched from the Sorcerers hand, it impacted against a wall and screams of mercy erupted from nearby. Viran grinned evilly at Crason and bowed.

“Here is Catlan and Alandra, brother and sister, they are both deadly with their dual short-swords, they are agile and quick, they will serve you well.”

They both bowed and Alandra winked at Crason, she seemed to be interested in him.

“And last and by no means least, Jildra So’Ilren. One of Mother Lloth’s faithful, she was recommended to me by Lloth herself. A Cleric of no small power she has the means to aid you well in combat as well as… information gathering.”

“Let us get this straight human, I do not serve you, I serve Mother Lloth, you are named Crason yes? You will call me leader until I deem it unnecessary.”

Crason became enraged at these words.

“You do not serve me?! How dare you! You will call me leader or I shall put you in your place!”

She became rebuked at this and stared balefully at Crason. Alandra smirked and Cyric smiled.

“You of course know your brother, Dilan, he has had a few… improvements…”

He slung off his cloak and showed a metallic arm, he pressed a button and a small throwing knife launched from hand.

“You will find that these people will serve you well, they are all garbed in similar equipment to yours and will accompany you on your quest.”

“My liege, I apologise for my interruption but what is the nature of my quest? Why have I been given all these gifts?”

“You, will be searching for one artefact that will give me the power to, shall we say, remove some opposition… Your quest starts in the Spine of the World, search for one called Hilari, Jildra will help you extract the necessary information, she knows what is to be done…”

With that Cyric waved his hand and all became black, they reappeared in a small room lit by candles and with bowls of Black Lotus on a small table. Words echoed through the chamber…

“Enjoy yourself, you have some time before I will take you to where you need to be…”

Alandra appeared beside Crason and whispered in his ear…

“Come, let us find a room…”


Well there it is. Tell us what you think! :)
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to be honest, I haven't read it all yet, but it is some damn fine writing. I look forward to having you in our next Story... :)
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Originally posted by Aegis:
<STRONG>to be honest, I haven't read it all yet, but it is some damn fine writing. I look forward to having you in our next Story... :) </STRONG>
Thank you Aegis, it's appreciated. :)

I will carry on writing. I want this to be an epci though. I plan on making it very long... :)
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Great writing Nippy!
(we'll see if you could surpass Gabriel ;) )
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I'm glad you all like it! :)

@ Morlock, you mean get if finished? :D
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Originally posted by Nippy:
<STRONG>@ Morlock, you mean get if finished? :D </STRONG>

Well, that's a good start! ;)

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A Stooooryyy!
Yes, just what I need: some distraction. :cool:
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I am continuing this, it's just I'm taking some exams at the moment as well, don't worry, we are a long way from finishing... :)

Chapter 4

Davion stirred restlessly on his bed, he had had little sleep and felt that this bed rest was unnecessary; He got up and rolled out of bed dressed in his underwear and walked towards the exercise area, which was completely unused late at night. He began stretching his muscles, loosening his legs and testing the damaged shoulder.

Satisfied that the damage was gone he began his regular set of exercise, he climbed onto the parallel bars and began a set of demanding acrobatic moves that tested even the strongest warrior. He was drenched in sweat and tiring out when he saw Gloria watching him.

With his eyes and concentration taken off of his current task he fell and landed flat on his back.

She ran over to him and helped him up, checking for any damage.

“I thought I was the only one up,” he said sheepishly.

She blushed; “Well I was just checking on my patient when I found him trying to hurt himself even more!”

He grinned at her and was about to reply when a tall man walked in from the corridor through the archway.

“What is my head guard doing up at this hour?” he asked, expecting no reply “I hope you aren’t cavorting with the girls Davion, it would not be seemly!” He grinned at Davion and Connavar walked into the light.

He was tall and broad-shouldered; age finally showing with greying hair that he vehemently denied existed.

“No matter! I am sure you are, showing her the grounds as it were?”

“Ah… Yes sir, that’s exactly what I was doing…”

“Good! I will leave you in peace, and Davion, meet me in my office tomorrow morning. We have something important to discuss.”

With that he left. Gloria stood next to Davion admiring his physique, but it wasn’t just his body that enraptured her, she was drawn into his steely spirit and his eyes demanded attention.

She shook herself off and composed herself; she was acting like a child!

Davion was in a similar predicament, he stood looking at her, the pale moonlight filtered through the shuttered window and a light highlighted her face. She was beautiful in every sense of the word. He was captivated by her and drawn into her very spirit, was destiny calling?

She looped her arm in his and asked to be escorted to her quarters.

“But of course, milady, thy will be done…”

Chapter 5

As morning broke over the Government district of Athkatla a bright sunlight beamed through Connavar’s large bay window, he stood looking out at the garden observing his children playing, chasing butterflies as they floated with effortless ease from flower to flower.

Davion stood facing Connavar across his desk, although he was a guardsman he had a good relationship with Connavar and he considered himself to be lucky to be counted among his friends.
“Davion, I am an old man now;” Davion opened his mouth but was hushed with a wave of Connavar’s hand.

“It is time for me to end my public life. I have all that I want, my children, my wife and my house. That is all I need, yet you my friend, are not content with this. I know of your fight in Lethinan’s place, it was wrong of you to do that, though I am grateful for the sacrifice you made for my honour. I… I, this is difficult for me to say Davion, you are a valued friend, and I trust you with my life, but you serve another purpose. There is something for you to do, that you have to do, not only for me, but for yourself, and possibly even the God’s.”

A knock at the door interrupted Connavar.

“Enter!”

The family butler opened the door and announced the entrance of one ‘Thatlos Asdir’. He was a man growing old, he wore armour that was lighter than what he would have worn had he been younger and his hands instead of weapon calluses were growing soft with inaction. He was still a large man by any means and could still hold his own in a fight.

“I am glad you have come Thatlos, you know what has to be said, please explain to Davion here.”

“I am glad to meet you Davion, I have heard much about you.”

“Who from? Connavar?”

“Nay my friend, from someone you know all about, Tempus himself!”

Davion scoffed at the thought, his God speaking to someone else about him? Lunacy!

”I can see the doubt in your eye, let me reveal some truth’s then to show you I speak the truth… Your family died by black murder, Cyric’s assassins delivered the blows themselves, you have known this but there has been nothing you can do to prove it. Connavar found you as a boy with nothing but your father’s sword, which you carry still today. Is that enough or do you need more?”

Davion stood in awe, only Connavar, himself and the old Ilmaterian priest knew of his past and yet this man flung out his past like it was common knowledge.

“I understand your scepticism but this is true, trust me!”

“Aye, I will, if it is Tempus’ will, let it be done. What would you have of me?”

“All I ask is that you come with me to Tempus’ temple in the city, you must see what he wishes you to see, for he has asked that I bring you to him.”

“Do I have leave Connavar?”

“Yes my son, yes you do, feel free to leave.”

“May I take Gloria with me? She would want to see this.”

“Yes take her, I have a feeling that you two will become inseparable…”

He had a wry smile on his face and he turned around again and looked out at the garden to watch his family play. A small tear ran down his cheek, he did not know if he would see his ‘son’ again. The click of the door was the last sign of Davion and Thatlos leaving…
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Chapter 6

As the trio walked down the hallway towards the massive metallic doors of Tempus’ holy ground, Thatlos uttered some of Tempus’ words.

Gloria walked in awe, the statues of Tempus’ most devout followers clouded her vision, she was struck by the size and intricacy that the craftsmen had given to them.

Davion strode alongside Thatlos, his large frame glided along with an effortless ease. He looked like he could walk on water…

The guardsmen saluted Thatlos as he pushed the doors open. They were perfectly waited so that a small child could open them, yet when barred could hold out an army.

Greeted by some of the Acolytes of the church Thatlos gestured them away with a wave of his hand. He motioned for Davion and Gloria to follow him into a small recess chamber.

A simple fire and a flue greeted them and one chair sat in the middle of the room. He told Davion to sit down and pulled a small pouch of powder from his armour. He threw it into the fire and it glowed blue, he asked Gloria to follow him out of the room and left Davion in the room.

A small plume of blue smoke wafted from the flame towards Davion. It circled around his booted feet and rose steadily up his legs and around his torso, it crept ever so slowly up towards his face.

Davion breathed in and the smoke went with the air, the room became a haze and slowly his vision went to black.

A deep-pitched voice called out to him, quietly first, but the volume increased at a quick pace.

“DAVION! I call you! Awaken from your dream and speak to me my child!”

A young man with a suit of armour crafted beautifully greeted Davion. He removed his helm and Davion saw his deep blue eyes, he was struck by the intensity of them.

”You have come, it is now time for you to learn why you are here. Thatlos has not told you why you were to come, as I asked of him. You, my child, are on my chosen faithful. I have called you here to give you your commission. You are to fight for the good of your realm, the good of the God’s and lastly for me. Cyric is angered, he searches for the one thing that I cannot and neither any other get to. Not even the mighty Ao may reach this artefact. You are charged with finding it, it is said that a mortal is the only being capable of obtaining this. It is guarded by things not only physically dangerous, but mentally. It is a difficult task, if you do not accept this task you will have your memories of this place removed and all those around you will not know of why you left. If you agree I have things to give and tell you.”

Davion stood in awe. He was here with his God, being told that he was a chosen warrior.

“My lord, with all due respect, am I the right choice? I gladly accept but what can I do? I am nothing! There are warriors with more skills than I.”

”But do they have your courage? Do they have your lineage? You are of the line of Jerrod, saviour of the north and one of my most faithful friends. You will do this, for I know you have the fire of your ancestor!”

“I accept then my liege, you who art the most glorious will be served well by I. It is my endeavour to serve you like my ancestor did!”

”Good! I expected no less! In that case then, you had better had some equipment had you not? Give me your sword.”

“But why my lord? My sword is my sword, as it was my fathers.” He said while giving him the sword.
”Aye, it is, but I am making it more than just yours. Your ancestors were great warriors. As you know, their blades are dipped in the blood of the fallen. I give you their blood and mine!”

With that he cut his wrist and the blood of a God and his servants fell on the blade. It glowed a deep and bright blue and the edge could cut metal like butter.

”I give you a set of my personal armour, lighter than what I wear now, it will help you in your rage, it will augment its powers. It will stop the fear of demon and dragon and will repel all but the strongest cuts and thrusts of any swords.”

The armour appeared on Davion, it was a metal, but lighter than leather. He felt like it would fall apart with the smallest touch but he had faith in Tempus.

”Lastly I give you my helm. You will always see true with this on and you will always curry the faith of your allies.

The Helm appeared in his left hand, his right hand held his family’s sword.

“You will not be going on your own though. The other God’s know of Cyric’s plans and you have been given a party of allies. Gloria will adventure with you. You will find Thatlos has equipped her with provisions and armour and weapons. I have also given her some more potent spells. She will be a useful member to your party. I now give you your companions;”

“Lia Nightbreeze, an Elven mage, she will guide you on your quest and will help you with the mystical lore. Aust Nightbreeze is Lia’s husband, he is an archer of no small means but also uses a long sword to deadly affect.”

They appeared beside Tempus and gave them his greeting; they walked down and met Davion. She was graceful but looked purposeful and determined, he was similar, like all Elves but had a calmer and more relaxed face.

“Ulfgar Ungart, a Dwarven Paladin. He is to protect and guide you in your journey North, he is strong, trustworthy and serves a devout purpose.”

Ulfgar appeared and met Davion again. He was taller than the average Dwarf and equally stocky.

“And who better than a thief to catch a thief? Delis is a rogue who could lift your pouch out of your hands without trying but uses his talents to track unlawful and evil members of society.”

A half-Elven male appeared, he was graceful and relaxed and had a rapier at his side.

“Hello my friends well met! It appears we are on a merry little quest! I do hope we can have some fun!”

He grinned at them all and bowed to Tempus.

“Well these are the allies you have, they will serve you well. Meet them in the Copper Coronet and once you are ready to leave, ask Lia to chant this spell. It is a complex teleportation spell that will take you to the last place Cyric’s chosen were sighted, the area around Dorn’s Deep.”


Ulfgar’s eyes widened at that, but he shrugged it off. The group slowly dissipated.

”Good luck Davion, you will serve me well I know. Go forth and fight for me!”

Davion’s vision faded again and he was sat in the chair. He left the room and met a flushed Gloria,

“Come quickly there’s a brawl at the Copper Coronet, Connavar’s in danger!”
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Can I get your honest opinion on whether I should continue writing this? Is it worth it? Thanks... :)
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That is good....
Does this answer the question Nippy? :D
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