My Five-Hour Love Affair

friend_al_23 · #1 (**permalink**) 11-13-2001, 07:57 PM

Will you comment on this article. Probably check some grammar and stuff too. Thanks.

VoodooDali · #2 (**permalink**) 11-13-2001, 08:04 PM

Was that it? "Monthly transfer limit exceeded."

friend_al_23 · #3 (**permalink**) 11-13-2001, 08:15 PM

Oh my gosh. Thanks for pointing that out. That's not the URL really. I just forgot to put the link. Anyway, here's the article:
http://www.geocities.com/friend_al_2...ine/mfhla.html

Aegis · #4 (**permalink**) 11-13-2001, 09:03 PM

Whats with the soft porn?

friend_al_23 · #5 (**permalink**) 11-13-2001, 09:22 PM

First of all, I didn't write that. Second, the article will be publish in our school journal / newspaper called Dataline and I need to correct those errors, typos, maybe even how the sentence is suppose or do you thik it should be re-written. So I would appreciate if you could help me out. I have others here but I don't want you people doing my job unless that's okay with you.