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01-12-2006, 07:15 PM
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may be a strange question.. but do any of you write lyrics, and want to share them.. and be really nice and allow me to make a song out of it..? i play guitar, and have a friend that plays base.. and we make a lot of instrumental music parts, but we miss lyrics, and we both suck at writing any.. so anyone have any 
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01-12-2006, 07:23 PM
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I used to write a lot of lyrics for a few of the emo and hardcore bands in my high school when I was there. Unfortunately, my writing cut off rather abruptly in the form of poetry and lyrics in 2002. I could dig through my old poems if I can find them, they happen to be somewhere online...I lost them.  If I find them, I could send them to you via PM to use if you wanted. I really don't have any use for them anymore anyways.
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01-12-2006, 07:26 PM
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that would be really nice  thanks!
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01-12-2006, 09:57 PM
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*sighes* The best I ever wrote was a tribute to Queen. You probably dont want those.
Ive got some I wrote though.
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01-13-2006, 04:13 AM
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if you have any, feel free to PM me with/about them
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01-24-2006, 02:49 PM
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| | It's this strange sensation,
that somethings just not right,
It stalks in the daytime,
And attacks the Heart at night.
Some times I just dont know,
what I'm going to do.
Will I love?
Will I hate?
Will I try something new?
Chorus;
Lock me up,
I cant keep control of myself,
Lock me up,
Before I can hurt someone else,
Lock me up,
I dont know what Im going to do,
Lock me up,
I hate feeling like this,
around you.
Sometimes I wonder,
Why I cant just
control myself.
Why cant I just settle to something,
like everyone else?
Am I that different?
Am I that strange?
Is this true?
Chorus;
Lock me up,
I cant keep control of myself,
Lock me up,
Before I can hurt someone else,
Lock me up,
I dont know what Im going to do,
Lock me up,
I hate feeling like this,
around you.
Chorus;
Lock me up,
I cant keep control of myself,
Lock me up,
Before I can hurt someone else,
Lock me up,
I dont know what Im going to do,
Lock me up,
I hate feeling like this,
around you.
Is this the real me?
Is this just fantasy?
I'm caught in a landslide,
with no escape from reality.
What can I do?
Chorus;
Lock me up,
I cant keep control of myself,
Lock me up,
Before I can hurt someone else,
Lock me up,
I dont know what Im going to do,
Lock me up,
I hate feeling like this,
around you.
I hate feeling like this,
around you.
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01-24-2006, 05:02 PM
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@ Chu: Nice lyrics... I'm imagining you could make something that sounds like Iced Earth from that
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01-24-2006, 10:08 PM
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im impressed *picks up guitar*
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01-25-2006, 08:30 AM
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Originally Posted by Grimar im impressed | It definately needs some cleaning up.
Especially the first verse, methinks. | | |
01-25-2006, 08:36 AM
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Wow. Nice Chu. You ain't as crazy as you appear to be  Not sure if that is a good thing
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01-25-2006, 07:16 PM
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| | Nice, Chu.
I think you should have a copyright for it.  | | |
01-25-2006, 08:11 PM
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@ Grimar; Who do you have singing? Is it you, your buddy, or a third party?
@ CM, Still waters run deep, my friend.
Would anyone be interested in helping me work the first verse around? Something just seems off with it to me. Then Grimar could just choose which one he likes best. | | |
01-25-2006, 08:13 PM
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I think it's great, chu! I've tried writing lyrics, I found yours is quite similiar to mine. 
As for the first verse, I like it. It's this strange sensation,
that somethings just not right,
It stalks in the daytime,
And attacks the Heart at night.
Some times I just dont know,
what I'm going to do.
Will I love?
Will I hate?
Will I try something new?
The lines is bold is what sounds awkward to me, but that's just my opinion.  | | |
01-25-2006, 08:16 PM
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Originally Posted by Oscuro_Sol Some times I just dont know,
what I'm going to do.
Will I love?
Will I hate?
Will I try something new?[/I]
The lines is bold is what sounds awkward to me, but that's just my opinion. | I was thinking the tail end of that verse was off, yes, but I couldnt exactly pinpoint it. Hmmm, how to fix it . . . | | |
01-26-2006, 04:41 AM
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Originally Posted by ch85us2001 @ Grimar; Who do you have singing? Is it you, your buddy, or a third party? | well. i study music, so i am in a class with ca 10+ singers, so i guess ill just make the music first, and ask if one of them would like to sing!
oh, and btw. it's not sure that i can manage to make music to this. not that the lyrics arent good, just that i aint that skilled a musician, but i have to start somewhere
if you want, and if i manage to make something out of it, i can try to get it recorded and send it to you?
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