Letter? Want to add anything?

[CodyCarson]

ROBERT CARON
1142 Steel St. S.E.
Medicine Hat, Alberta
Canada
T1A 1E7
1 403 504 4322
y2j49@hotmail.com


January 27, 2005


Obsidian Entertainment, Inc.
1560 Brookhollow Drive, Suite 220
Santa Ana, CA 92705
USA

To whom it my concern,

Hello, My name is Robert Caron and I love playing you RPG games. My favorite games are the Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic ones. Well, I would like to give you and idea for Star Wars: knights of the Old Republic III.

First of all, it could be called Star wars Knight of the Old Republic III: The Rebirth of the Jedi. It may also be called, Star was Knight of the Old Republic III: The Outer rim. I think KOTOR III should start with you being a young Jedi at the start, human or non who goes in search of Revan and The Exile on the outer rim planets. Then a big shock would be to find out that you are the son/daughter of Bastila and Revan or Revan and Carth. You fight along side the exile who’s face was burned severely in a fight with something and he/she must now wear a mask. Also, a cool thing to add it would be with Jedi robes, you can have them on and a cloak over them. With the cloak, you can have the hood up or down. A good thought would be that you are young Jedi and you must fist earn you saber. Whys to earn it lie by meditating, studying the Jedi code and battling with other. Then you must battle light side padwans and defeat dark Jedi to slowly climb in the ranking. So the more experience you get, the better you become.

Like if you are at level 25 or something, you are a Jedi knight in the making 30 a Jedi knight 40 a Jedi knight with mastery of his lightsaber 50 a Jedi master 65 and up you are a supreme Jedi with full mastery of the force and his lightsaber. Also a good addition would be some new force powers. Like force throw, where you can throw objects at opponents. Also, having new worlds, like Haruun Kal, the cloud city, More Korriban. Bring in new planets as well.

Thank you very much for readying my letter. My contact information is at the top of this letter. IF you wish, please feel free to mail me back. Thank you again for reading.

Sincerely,

Robert Caron

[Xandax]

Don't know what you want people to add
Although there are some spelling/typos which should be corrected, and personally - I'd reword some of the sentences.

For instance - Obsidiant has only developed KOTOR2 and not the first - so you can't say "KOTOR ones" because there is only one.
And what other Obsidian RPGs have you played?
Avoiding formulations like "It would be cool" and other chat-related formulations.

Besides this - then I doubt that Obisdian is the company which gets to make the decision to create a KOTOR3 or not.

Also a better explanation of your suggestions and wishes - possible on a list form for instance - would likely be better in my view.

Anyways - good luck with the letter

[CodyCarson]

Thanks alot.............