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02-07-2003, 02:37 AM
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| | Sorry about your writing Aegis.
I always make sure I got a back up before I post.
@CM
Hey, you started talking. I followed your lead. 
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02-07-2003, 01:03 PM
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| | | Ok, it's up, and as close the original as I could make it. |
02-07-2003, 01:09 PM
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| | ****ing hell!!! Great post Aegis 
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02-07-2003, 06:09 PM
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| | | OK, Aegis, Im only going to say this once, so I hope its clear:
You Are the Man, Aegis....You are the man!
Great post...I actually said "Word" out loud when the baddies got the knives in their heads and guts and whatnot...just awesome, man.
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02-07-2003, 09:04 PM
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| | | This is more a pet peeve then anything else, but when writing, can we try to keep it in a past tense, just so it flows. We had a slight problem with this in Magus' stories as well. |
02-07-2003, 09:08 PM
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| | Quote: Originally posted by Aegis
This is more a pet peeve then anything else, but when writing, can we try to keep it in a past tense, just so it flows. We had a slight problem with this in Magus' stories as well. | Sure. Ill keep an eye out in the future. I have a tendency to make tense errors, though, so if I miss something, just kindly point it out to me, and Ill be happy to fix it. Righty righty.
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02-07-2003, 11:12 PM
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| | Looks like I missed a fight. Regrettably, I was having some computer problems. As in my computer wouldn't boot.  It's all good now though. Well, mostly at least. I'll just have to come up with something to explain why Magus didn't join in.
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02-09-2003, 08:28 AM
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| | Quote: Originally posted by Aegis
This is more a pet peeve then anything else, but when writing, can we try to keep it in a past tense, just so it flows. We had a slight problem with this in Magus' stories as well. | I didn't see this post until now.
So I didn't kno you suggested that.
But I'll do it from now on. 
About my post:
Aegis, your characters have actually met the "bad guy". But she is a bit confused and paranoia so she won't always make sence.
Just thought i'd mention.
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02-13-2003, 12:40 PM
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| | A little clarification:
The cantrip and the man stumbling through the door were unrelated events. Also, only someone who was carefully observing Magus would have noticed him casting it. And if he (or she) did, it would only seem like incoherent mumbling unless he knew something of magic himself.
@Rob-hin: If you could, could you include the result of the cantrip in your next post? Didn't want to jump to conclusions or anything.
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02-13-2003, 02:12 PM
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| | Quote: Originally posted by Magus
A@Rob-hin: If you could, could you include the result of the cantrip in your next post? Didn't want to jump to conclusions or anything. | Sure thing, good thinking.
I got ideas for it while i was reading your (very good) post. 
I was curious to how everybody would react to her entrance.
You all read my mind. BTW She didn't cast a spell or anything, there is something that just grabs you. But you all noticed that yourself.
Don't think I'll get to it today though.
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02-14-2003, 10:56 AM
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| | Hmm, perhaps I made her leave to soon.
Ow well, it's been online to long now. I'll leave it this way. 
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02-14-2003, 11:33 AM
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| | | Yes, I still live, and am still involved. But, as I said, I'd rather take sometime in my posts to make sure I capture the essence of both characters. Anyway, they've reached the inn, and have sat down. |
02-15-2003, 01:47 PM
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| | Glad you could make it.
It's one freaky busy night in the inn tonight! 
Barbarians, the mistery lady and a worg... whatever that is.
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02-15-2003, 02:39 PM
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| | Well worgs typically travel in packs, but he could have just been a stray from the pack, so its just something more to build off of.
Heres a picture of one...the worgs on the bottom. 
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02-15-2003, 03:18 PM
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| | | Worgs are basically just really big wolves. They're generally evil, and fairly intelligent. They have their own language, I believe. They were in BG1, if you've played it. In power, I'd say they're probably on par with a dire wolf.
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