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Old 02-15-2007, 03:48 PM
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Te chronicles of Reven (spoilers on kotor 1 and 2. And possibally 3? :S)

Just before i start, this story starts from the crash landing on duxn with malak, and hopefully, wil finish with the programming of Revens mind by the Councel. There will be (if people like my stores and continue asking for more) include the finding of bastillas battle meditation, a brief moment with Atton, and if i finish i will be happy to (if anyone asks) to do one based on the mandalorian wars including parts with the exile, Hk, and an encounter with mandalore. (This has nothing to do with any events posted by lucas arts. This is purley my imgaination at work! (God help you) ENJOY!)

In the depths of space, in a system where only a few know of, is a space station, which harnesses the dark side of the force to create fleets upon fleets of vessels and entire armies of weaponary. This facility has not been used for over a millenia, untill the end of the mandaloran wars that is.
Part I: The discovery of Rakata prime
Reven paced up and down in the cockpit while Malak and a corupted jedi, going by the name of Harato Jokren, where clicking away at the control panels which controlled the various systems of the small frigate, the Sersho.
Reven, with his usual muddy red mask covering his face, was getting tense. After all the time searching for the star forge, all that time finding the star maps, and soon that journy would be over, the reality of it was a hard thing to face. He pushed that thought out of his mind.
"How far off are we Malak?" Reven asked, his cool dark voice eminating as if from no-where. He hadn't spoken since the jump to hyperspace, leaving the rest of the fleet. Malak, turning round in his chair to face him, replied,
"five minutes to go my master. Tell me, why have you brought Harato? He has showed nothing in the feild of exellence?" Harato gave him a dark look and then spat out darkly.
"I have always shown loyalty to the dark lord and have never disobeyed him." He then stood up out of his chair, bowed at reven, and left the cockpit.
Reven turned his head back round to Malak.
"Patience my friend. Harato is here to keep the ship running, nothing more. It will be me and you who harnesses the power, not that feeble minded fool." Malak smiled and turned back to the command controls. A few minutes passed by and Reven started pacing again. Harato came back with a cup of something that Reven did not care to take intrest in. A bleeping noise occured a few moments later. Harato stood up.
"We're here." Malak said smiling. As the blue warp of hyperspace slowly turned into the millions of stars that filled up the galaxy, Reven moved towards the main window of the ship. A blue planet soared out of nowhere. Surrounding it, where 3 small moons. The sun of that system was standing out just at the edge of the system, and above it, was the three pronged space station, absorbing the stars energy. Harato glimpsed in awe, Malak stared greedily, and Reven, behind his mask, smiled. Yet there was something odd about the area surrounding it. Reven could feel it. There was something that could not been seen that protected it.
"Lets go." Malak said and pressing a few buttons, they where off.
After a short while, they flew past the only planet in the system, and then the shipped fell into the atmoshpere..
"Whats going on?" Harato asked.
"Shut up you! We're caught in a disruptor feild! where crashing on the planet! strap yourselves in!" Reven stayed standing. He did not want to miss the veiws of the planet they where rapidly coming into contact with. Harato hurried for the main hold, and strapped himself into a seat. The ground came closer and closer, untill all that could be seen was sand. Just before the crash, Reven reached out with all his mind. Then all was dark.

Sheruto wandered the beaches regulary when he was bored. There was nothing else on these islands to do exept kill elders and that was a waste of time due to their magics. The one was a powerfull leader, but even he could not wipe out the elders. His sword clinked on his side. He sat down on the sand. He didn't think about anything, he just sat. After a few moments, a blast of smoke appeared out of nowhere in the sky. Getting closer and closer was a small forengier ship. Sheruto stared at it untill it fell into the next area of the beach. He waited, and waited, and waited for the loud noise of the crash but none came. He drew his sword and slowly walked over the hill, through the clumps of trees to where the supposed crash site was.

Malak opened his eyes. He could see nothing. All the controls were offline, and there was no light coming through the main windows. He turned round, and Reven was standing there, a faint outline in the darkness, arms reached out. He slowly raised his arms, and light came through the main window. He the moved his right hand, and the sound of the landing gear lowering appeared, and finally, he lowered bth his hands, the ship landed, and the boarding ramp lowered. Malak stared at Reven. Reven turnd to face his apprentice.
"Next time, im bringing Hk." Reven said and took his lightsabr out of his belt and walked towards the ramp. Malak took out his and followed.
"Harato stay on the ship." Malak called, just as Harato was about to leave. Harato raised his finger to his back. Malak force pushed Harato to the ground.

Reven and Malak, after Exiting the ship, came into a world which only had two types of plant; grass, and an unusall tree with palms on the top of the trunk. Reven stood still. Malak walked up to him.
"What is it?" Malak asked, his dark voice hardly changing.
"I heard something. Keep yoour blade drawn." Reven replied, igniting his own lightsaber. They walked forward, evntullyleaving the beach and going on to grassland, covered by wreckages of ships thousands of years old. Reven stopped after an hour of walking.
"We're being followed." Reven whispered. And with that a large group of aliens attacked from behind a small crashed ship. The first one the attacked was cut down by Malak. The next was electrocuted by Reven. Then finally, the rest of the group attacked in unison. Reven deactiveated his saber and reached out with the force. A massive shockwave knocked back all twelve of the aliens. After the aliens recovered, they began talking. Reven dragged the language of there people out of their minds and placed the language of basic in.

Last edited by DarthBob; 02-17-2007 at 03:34 AM.
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