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Old 11-18-2005, 02:28 AM
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Dostrem wasn't sure how long he had slept, when suddenly he was woke up by two Goa'ulds. They were armed by zats, so Dostrem decided to go with them in peace.

Again, Dostrem was taken through the tunnel to the same room where he met the woman yesterday. Again, the woman was waiting in the room, this time alone. With quick motion of hand she ordered guards to leave Dostrem to the floor and leave the room.
"So, we meet again."
She spoke words which Dostrem wasn't able to understand, and suddenly door opened at the other side of the room. Huge man came in. Woman spoke again, and this time the man lifted Dostrem from ground and carried him to table and strapped his arms and legs with metal straps.
"I promised that I will get every bit of information out from you. Do you still believe I'm not able to do that?"
Dostrem lifted his head and gave evil grin:
"With your patethic methods? No, my believes has not changed since yesterday!"
Woman sighted slightly. "Good, I was hoping for that answer. It means that this is going to be very interesting. I'm going to enjoy our moments of conversations"
She walked to one of shelves, took small zat-like item from it.
"This is modified zat. It has made for situations like this, when the target must not get unconsious." She raised the weapon, aimed Dostrem's chest and shoot. The pain was great, but he didn't let any voice come out from his mouth.
"As I thought, this had no affect to you. Well, not yet at least. What els..."
Suddenly, there was sound that was very likely alarm.
She dropped the weapon and hissed: "Damn those fools! What they have done now? Can I not leave them alone even for few minutes?!"
She looked Dostrem with evil smile. "I must go now to check what's the problem, but I'll be back and then we can continue our little "conversation"."
She nodded to man, and then they both left through the door where the man had came, leaving Dostrem alone.

So, now he had a chance to escape. But how would he get out from this table? His hands and legs were strapped with metal.

While pondering this problem he heard sound of firing coming outside of the room. But the sound wasn't coming from zat, but M-16. And that meant that someone else from Earth was here.
Door opened, and three man step in.
Suprised Dostrem looked these three, as they looked him at least as suprised as he.
Dostrem knew these three, and they knew him...
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Old 12-27-2005, 05:40 AM
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Rooting through his supplies he looked for anything that might idenify the hiding place to only him but to no avail. He would have to trust his memory and hope to return to this place unaided. Changing his mind about taking the zat, which was unreliable at the best of times he took his Beretta and some extra ammunition. Hopefully, he wouldn't need it or he would be as good as dead. The Jaffa could be efficient when they had the motivation.

Leaving the secluded hiding spot behind, he continued on towards the city where he still hoped to find a former acquiantance. Still wrapped in the indigineous clothing, he didn't expect too many problems along the route.

Soon enough he reached an overlooking hillside where one could easily see the city. Collins spied a Goa'uld Hatak and some troop transports on the ground. Obviously there was a big presence today, this might make things difficult. The city itself was impressive too, he saw several domed towers and giant statues but there was a domination of plain houses. Without the Goa'uld craft this could be any ordinary city on any planet, even of Earth if these people were not less advanced. There was a lack of metal or steel in the city beyond that which the Goa'uld were using, obviously the natives weren't up to that level of sophistication yet...or the Jaffa had reduced the more impressive buildings to rubble that he could not see from outside. The city was walled and seemed to have 2 main gates on each of the North, South, East and West walls.

The disguise was beginning to feel inadequate, but it was still the best thing available to him. He was getting close to the city's East gates now and he hadn't been challenged by the nearby patrols as yet, though that may change at any time. Naturally, the thing he dreaded happened and a voice from behind called out "HALT!"
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Old 12-27-2005, 07:50 AM
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-"Dostrem, is it really you?"
-"Yes, Lucas, it's me. But what on earth are you three doing here?"
-"Me, Mick and Zack were sent to this planet to find out why whole city was empty, when we found out that it was full of Goa'ulds." Lucas replied "But first we are going to free you, then we must get out of here, then we can continue this conversation."

Lucas walked to Dostrem, studied the straps for a moment, then pushed a small button, and the straps opened. He told to Dostrem to follow them, and then they leaved the room.

After short time they were outside, standing in front of building which contained another entrance to caves. Within a moment they were outside of the city, running towards the stargate. When they reached it, Dostrem suddenly halted.

-"I'm sorry, but I can not come with you."
-"Why not? Many would like to know that you are still alive." Lucas answered.
-"I know, but it's safer to me and especially to you if no-one knows that I'm alive and where I'm. So, I must ask you that you don't tell anybody that you had met me."
-"Could you at least tell us what have you been doing all this time?"
-"No, it's confidental information. And even if it weren't, I would only risk your life and the Earth if I told it to you."

Lucas and Dostrem looked eachother for a moment.

-"Will we ever meet you again?" Lucas finally asked.
-"Hopefully, but I can't promise anything." He looked to the direction where the city was. "Now hurry, leave this place, the Goa'ulds are coming. I will leave this place as soon as you have."
Lucas nodded quickly, then shouted to Mick to open the gate. After a few seconds, the gate was opened to Earth. Zack and Mick stepped through it, Lucas following them. Just before he stepped to gate, he turned around, and looked Dostrem.
-"Good luck"
And then he stepped through.

Quickly, after the gate was closed, Dostrem selected new address. The gate opened, and he stepped to it, just moments before Goa'ulds got to weapon's range.
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