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08-14-2005, 10:25 PM
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| | It is just not the day for Aegis and Gypsy, now is it. First a nasty Half-Orc, then a Demon Gnome, and now a Monk on a mission. Oi.  |
08-14-2005, 10:35 PM
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| | | well, the only monk i know of is Blade, if this guys a monk, theres gonna be problems lol
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08-14-2005, 11:44 PM
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Originally Posted by Aegis It is just not the day for Aegis and Gypsy, now is it. First a nasty Half-Orc, then a Demon Gnome, and now a Monk on a mission. Oi. | Hey, don't blame me, Aegis and Gypsy came to Erudish and Amelie.
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08-15-2005, 12:16 PM
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Originally Posted by Demortis hey Rav, just look back through the thread, i had a hard time and people threw ideas out at me lol, maybe one can help you | *phew* That would be a very long way back, then? Um... any more immediate tips?  |
08-15-2005, 12:17 PM
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| | | Why don't you do a little piece solely focussed on character development, like a flashback, or a memory? Or maybe you can show us how he reacts to various incidents - just a little something to provide depth and feel.
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08-15-2005, 12:21 PM
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| | Hmm... I'll think about that. I'll just have to read the stuff I posted before in the story to get into the feel of the character again.
Thanks  . |
08-15-2005, 12:52 PM
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| | | why do i get the feeling that Aegis doesnt like monks..... maybe that because i just woke up lol oh well, this should be interesting to see how this turns out
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Ours is not to question why. Ours is just to do or die.
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08-15-2005, 06:35 PM
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| | @Ravager...No worries 
@Demo...Aegis is just angry because every character that he's encountered so far has been hostile to him
I'm looking forward to Aegis and Gypsy's third consecutive fight
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08-16-2005, 10:58 AM
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| | I've written two new installments. I just want to check FR town names and locations before I post them. Must get the details right... I'm a bit of a perfectionist .
I've posted Part 3 & 4. What do you all think?
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08-17-2005, 01:28 PM
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| | My Touch Of Death has extended to SE .
Been busy today- read up to the end of page 5 of the SE story and written another installment which I'll post a bit later. |
08-17-2005, 01:40 PM
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| | | This could prove interesting Rav.
Maybe I should post something about Blade.....
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08-17-2005, 01:44 PM
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| | Thanks, Demo.
Now I just have to think of lots of excellent plot twists. More mustache-twirling evil... |
08-17-2005, 01:49 PM
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| | No problem Rav, I just wish my "muse" if thats what you want to call her, didnt have anything to do today  oh well, I'll try to get something new on Blade in teh next couple of days, maybe even meet up with someone in town
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Have you ever wondered why, in a dream you can touch a falling sky? Or fly to the heavens that watch over you. - Godsmack
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08-17-2005, 01:56 PM
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| | I just posted Part 5. Enjoy.
I've acquired a portable hole, so that add more interesting depth to the story . Lot's of potential there. |
08-17-2005, 02:10 PM
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Hey all,
I haven't had an iota of free time here in august. Needless to say, I've got some catching up to do in the discussion thread though I gather it is mostly banter. I need to read pages nine and ten in the story, as well as get my rear out of tethyr. The ideas are there but they need to written out. This weekend holds some possibility. However, the workplace has been insane which is where I had been finding some time to write.
So this is all a brief heads up that I'm trying to work this in but it's a lower priority right now. Apologies to the group, slit Pharis' throat if he's falling too far behind. Just let me know it's been done. Cheers.
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