Register Lost Password?  Cookie?
  The time now is 06:47 PM GMT -6.  
Banshee Network
 
Quick Links
 
 
GameBanshee Swag
Site Features
Submit News
News Archives
Join Our Staff
Forums
Community Blogs
Reviews
Previews
Interviews
Editorials
About GB
Advertise With Us!
Advertisement
 
Go Back   GameBanshee Forums > Forum Categories > Everything Else > Fan Fiction

Reply
GameBanshee Forums  
LinkBack Thread Tools Rate Thread Display Modes
  #16 (permalink)  
Old 11-25-2004, 05:58 PM
Golden Lion 86's Avatar
Exalted Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2004
Posts: 239
They should, but if they don't, I'm sure Jena will be compensated with lightning-speed swashbuckling abilities.
__________________
Taste my Leonine Fury, mortals!
Reply With Quote
  #17 (permalink)  
Old 11-26-2004, 05:15 AM
Yeltsu's Avatar
Exalted Member
 
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Norway
Posts: 1,844
Okay, here is my guy

Name: Miles Teg

Race: Human

Gender: Male

Age: 40

Eyes: Intense blue

Skin: Dark tanned, numrous scars, a few wrinkles starting to show.

Hair: His hair is dark, but is beginning to show specs of white here and there, The hair on his head is short, he also has a beard, that is beginning to grow white

Height: 190 cm (6.2 Feet)

Weight: 100 kilos (220 pounds)

Languages: He speaks common, but understands both dwarvish and elf

Alignment: Neutral Evil

Patron Deity: Tempus

Class: Fedaykin - the Fedaykin (the Death Commando) is the elite warrior of the desert, they are skilled in the ways of battle, but also in the more stealthier skills. They have perfected the art of ambush and guerilla tactics. Since they have to travel the desert and also usually finish a battle fast, they use light weapons and armor. (the Fedaykin is a mixture between a fighter and a stalker, except they don't have any spells)

Weapons - Daggers, short swords, scimitars, darts and throwing knives
(he usually prefers a scimitar and a dagger)

Personality: Miles doesn't talk much, he doesn't se the point in worthless conversaton. He usually let's others decide most things, like where to go, and what to do. But when in battle, Miles barks out orders left and right. He is an experienced commander in battle, and wise in the way of war.
Even though he is a mercenary, he has a strong sense of loyalty, he will never betray someone he is working for, and he will not be bribed. As all men of the desert, he is quick to anger. It also takes a while for him to trust someone, but once somebody get's his respect, trust and friendship they'll have it forever. He might even go so far as to leave his current master if he believes that his friends are in peril.
He doesn't really care about anyone, not even himself, and thus, he has no problems slaughtering an entire village of innocent people, but he might also help defend them. It all depends on what his current empoyer wants.
He is no goon, if he is mistreated and/or insulted by his employer he will slay him, and leave to find new work.
He lives as a mercenary, not for the money, but for the fighting. He was tought that every man is destined to become something in this world, either it is a king, or a peasant, and he feels that his destiny is to live and die as a Fedaykin.

History: Miles Teg comes from deep in the desert of Anauroch, where he lived with his tribe. The desert is harsh and unyeilding, and so is everybody born there, and Miles was no exeption. He learned the ways of desert warfare, and already as a youth he was an accomplished warrior, and well respected for his skills with arms. He also had a talent for strategic thinking, this he showed when he was assigned to lead an ambush on a caravan. The caravan was more heavily guarded than they had thought, but using his wits and skills, Miles defeated the superior guards. He was then assigned to the military counsil. After a particulary brutal attack from a superior tribe on his village Miles was the only one to survive. Having nothing left in the desert, he then left at an age of 26 and has since then served as a mercenary. He has served all kinds of masters, from good paladins of Helm, to evil and scheming drow wizards.
__________________
This is my signature.

Last edited by Asriel; 11-26-2004 at 10:14 AM.
Reply With Quote
  #18 (permalink)  
Old 11-26-2004, 08:38 AM
Golden Lion 86's Avatar
Exalted Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2004
Posts: 239
Fedaykin sounds very familiar. i know I heard it in Dune, but I don't remember where exactly.
__________________
Taste my Leonine Fury, mortals!
Reply With Quote
  #19 (permalink)  
Old 11-26-2004, 09:38 AM
Yeltsu's Avatar
Exalted Member
 
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Norway
Posts: 1,844
They are the elite troops of Muad'dib, the Death Commandos. I just thought it would be cool to base my character on a fremen. I am reading the books right now, so my head is simply filled with ideas of fremen and the like.
__________________
This is my signature.
Reply With Quote
  #20 (permalink)  
Old 11-26-2004, 06:34 PM
Golden Lion 86's Avatar
Exalted Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2004
Posts: 239
We need a Sardaucar then!
__________________
Taste my Leonine Fury, mortals!
Reply With Quote
  #21 (permalink)  
Old 11-27-2004, 06:19 AM
Yeltsu's Avatar
Exalted Member
 
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Norway
Posts: 1,844
I'll kick his a$$ and send him to Shai-Hulud
__________________
This is my signature.
Reply With Quote
  #22 (permalink)  
Old 11-27-2004, 08:24 AM
Golden Lion 86's Avatar
Exalted Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2004
Posts: 239
That's the Uber-Worm, IIRC, right?
__________________
Taste my Leonine Fury, mortals!
Reply With Quote
  #23 (permalink)  
Old 11-27-2004, 12:48 PM
Yeltsu's Avatar
Exalted Member
 
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Norway
Posts: 1,844
Yup.......... That's it!
__________________
This is my signature.
Reply With Quote
  #24 (permalink)  
Old 11-29-2004, 03:53 AM
Member
 
Join Date: Nov 2004
Posts: 6
name - Bayne
Race - winged elf
gender - male
age - 36
eyes - pale blue
skin - tanned
hair - short, brown with natural light brown highlights
height - 5'4
weight - 150pd
languages - elven, english
alignment - lawful neutral
class - fighter
equipment - dual weilds a katana and a scimitar, chain mail, black hooded cloak

personality- A dareing and mysterious elf with a passionate and warm heart.

<I'll finish this later, I'm a bit pressed for time >

Last edited by bayne; 11-29-2004 at 01:19 PM.
Reply With Quote
  #25 (permalink)  
Old 11-29-2004, 12:34 PM
Golden Lion 86's Avatar
Exalted Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2004
Posts: 239
Quote:
Originally Posted by bayne
name - Bayne
Race - winged elf
gender - male
eyes - pale blue
skin - tanned
hair - short, brown with natural light brown highlights
height - 5'11
weight - 170pd
languages - elven, english
alignment - lawful neutral
class - fighter
equipment - dual weilds a katana and a scimitar, chain mail, black hooded cloak

personality- A dareing and mysterious elf with a passionate and warm heart.

<I'll finish this later, I'm a bit pressed for time >
I can't stress this enough, but this simply makes my blood boil. This is NOT Lord of the Rings! In AD&D, Elves are TINY! They don't come that big. The biggest of elves are barely over 5 feet tall. This is almost as bad as that one guy who has a 6'6" half-Elf. Read the Description: "Elves are SHORTER and SLIMMER than normal Humans."

If you want someone that big, get a Human. Otherwise, you are pretty much limited to the 4'5"-5'0" range. Also, they only weigh about 50-100 lbs, but with the wings, maybe 140-150 should be acceptable.

Still, you need to rethink your dimensions, or your race.
__________________
Taste my Leonine Fury, mortals!
Reply With Quote
  #26 (permalink)  
Old 11-29-2004, 01:18 PM
Member
 
Join Date: Nov 2004
Posts: 6
Why are you so mad, for one you are the one with a 7ft 400pd behemoth of a character

But yes you are right, I'm not very educated in DnD.

This should work:

character profile: Bayne

height - 5,4
weight - 150
Reply With Quote
  #27 (permalink)  
Old 11-29-2004, 03:44 PM
Golden Lion 86's Avatar
Exalted Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2004
Posts: 239
Quote:
Originally Posted by bayne
Why are you so mad, for one you are the one with a 7ft 400pd behemoth of a character

But yes you are right, I'm not very educated in DnD.

This should work:

character profile: Bayne

height - 5,4
weight - 150
Granted, but 7ft is not nearly an uncommon in Humans as 5ft11 is in elves. I'd go as far as to say that 5ft11 is IMPOSSIBLE in elves, whereas there are hundreds of people who are over 7 ft tall.

It's not your size that pisses me off but the misconception that elves are that big. It's like people playing BG2 but taking their references from some ass-random fanfiction website that has nothing to do with BG2 and potrays elves as the humanoid twist on the giraffe. Either that or from LOTR, where elves are the same size as Humans.
__________________
Taste my Leonine Fury, mortals!
Reply With Quote
  #28 (permalink)  
Old 12-02-2004, 02:04 PM
Golden Lion 86's Avatar
Exalted Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2004
Posts: 239
Buzz Buzz!!!
__________________
Taste my Leonine Fury, mortals!
Reply With Quote
  #29 (permalink)  
Old 12-02-2004, 06:38 PM
werebeargoddess's Avatar
Exalted Member
 
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Stargazing in a field
Posts: 1,092
I think we could go ahead and set a posting order, unless bayne wants to wait for some more people to join.
__________________
Under Sun and Sky, outlander, we greet you warmly

This message was brought to you by the priests of the Goddess of the Werebears
Reply With Quote
  #30 (permalink)  
Old 12-03-2004, 04:49 AM
Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2004
Posts: 31
GL, I don't think all elves are that small. I don't know how big winged elves are but the most common high elves are small. I think its that either the wild elves, gold elves(or maybe gray elves) or wood elves that can get to around 5'11 and taller though.
Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools
Display Modes Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On

Forum Jump


 
      Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.7.2
Copyright ©2000 - 2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Search Engine Friendly URLs by vBSEO 3.2.0
© 2000-2008 GameBanshee.com