New Story - Page 2

werebeargoddess · #16 (**permalink**) 12-09-2004, 03:57 PM

I guess I'll have to be careful then.

But if you're going to write the next part, please don't introduce my character into the story, because I want to do that. If you want, I can go ahead and write the next part and introduce Jena, in case you want Leonis to run into her.

Golden Lion 86 · #17 (**permalink**) 12-09-2004, 09:50 PM

I was going to do a forest scene involving prey and a bear, and I could make that your cue. If you have other plans, then by all means, you go first.

hyaline · #18 (**permalink**) 12-10-2004, 03:48 AM

Great character profile GL, I thanks for reducing your physical apperance.

Perhaps with your chase of werebeargoddess you could also run into a particular Tiefling engaged with orcs. Only a suggestion.

Golden Lion 86 · #19 (**permalink**) 12-10-2004, 10:51 AM

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Originally Posted by hyaline

Great character profile GL, I thanks for reducing your physical apperance.

Perhaps with your chase of werebeargoddess you could also run into a particular Tiefling engaged with orcs. Only a suggestion.

No problem. I'm gonna do the part, but I can delete it if you don't like it, so no permanent damage is possible.

hyaline · #20 (**permalink**) 12-10-2004, 03:19 PM

I did some research on Ligers and in all the resources I've checked they are pretty much consistant with the height of Ligers being around 12ft (being around the tallest) and weighting around 900-1200 lbs.

Your numbers for your were-liger seem a bit stretched, could they be reduced?

werebeargoddess · #21 (**permalink**) 12-10-2004, 03:44 PM

I'll ahve my part up in a bit.

Golden Lion 86 · #22 (**permalink**) 12-10-2004, 03:52 PM

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Originally Posted by hyaline

I did some research on Ligers and in all the resources I've checked they are pretty much consistant with the height of Ligers being around 12ft (being around the tallest) and weighting around 900-1200 lbs.

Your numbers for your were-liger seem a bit stretched, could they be reduced?

You mean the 8'4, and 800 lbs? That's as low as I am willing to go for a big cat Hybrid form (Lost ability to fully shift to Human. It's in the Biography). As for the 15ft, 2000 lb Liger he shifts into, it is a bit above average (though 1500 lb Ligers have existed), but not unattainable for Ligers.

Golden Lion 86 · #23 (**permalink**) 12-10-2004, 04:22 PM

I read your part, and it's good. I was thinking tht there is ease to a 3 person party. You don't have to wait for weeks for the rotation to be over.

A few notes, though, if I may:
-Ligers are by no means common. There is a 100% probability that Ligers have occurred in nature, but Ligers are otherwise almost always a product of zoos, though they were originally not a deliberate attempt at genetic combination.
-Ligers do not exist in the wild, and thus do not come into contact with any other animals. This is to say that they don't really hate Bears, because Ligers don't have an established pattern of natural behavior.
-Bears don't get along with Tigers, but they often ignore each other, since an encounter can prove fatal to both (the Bear generally gets killed, and if the Tiger has severe enough wounds, he can't hunt very well and starves)
-This particular bear was actually out to steal my kill, unconcerned, at the moment, anyway, about any particular balance of forces.

Just thought I'd point these out, as the first three are not commonly known, and the last one was within my mind, and I might not have explained it very clearly. Hyaline, you're next again.

hyaline · #24 (**permalink**) 12-11-2004, 07:03 AM

My post is up, enjoy

Golden Lion 86 · #25 (**permalink**) 12-11-2004, 01:41 PM

Werebeargoddess, would you like the next part, or should I do it? I know I went second last time, but you joined before I did, so the turn is rightfully yours.

werebeargoddess · #26 (**permalink**) 12-11-2004, 02:14 PM

If you have thought of something to write, then go ahead. I think the order that we had is good: hyaline, you, then me.

Golden Lion 86 · #27 (**permalink**) 12-11-2004, 04:54 PM

Deal! I'll post it soon.

Golden Lion 86 · #28 (**permalink**) 12-11-2004, 11:34 PM

The part is posted. Sorry I took so long. I hope you enjoy. It is kind of long and has a lot of dialogue, but I did as best I could without deciding on the course of the story. I don't yet know where it's going, and I think Hyaline should decide, because he began the story.

hyaline · #29 (**permalink**) 12-12-2004, 05:01 AM

I'm not really sure where this story is going, when I started it I never really had a long term plot in mind.

Hmm...maybe one of you have an idea that could be shared? If not continue the story as you seem fit, this is after all a combined effort.

werebeargoddess · #30 (**permalink**) 12-12-2004, 08:21 AM

It's a nice part.

I was kinda thinking they could run into the Tiefling next. btw, does he have a name? I was thinking that Jena and Leonis could run into the Tiefling, then continue to track the aura she's been following. I was going to have the aura belong to the tiefling himself, but then I realized he was no longer near the town.