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Old 10-28-2004, 04:34 PM
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ungors part is now posted, and let me commend you for writing a very good part.

I especially liked how you indroduced the Bul'nur caves, very clever.
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Old 10-28-2004, 05:06 PM
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so, are we using the posting order that Sytze listed?
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Old 10-28-2004, 05:31 PM
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Posting order


cipher, sytze, werebeargoddess, ungor, golden lion, asriel


Next up is Golen lion 86
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Old 10-28-2004, 09:03 PM
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I just got home from University. I will begin immediately.
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Old 10-28-2004, 10:59 PM
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Talking Post-Post Analysis

My part is up, enjoy!

I left to the other writers' discretion what new weapons were chosen from the armory, as well as to werebeargoddess what exactly Kitty was drinking.

I did make Rethne's drink an ale, but what evil assassin, no matter how small (and hence vulnerable even to small quantities of alcohol), drinks non-alcoholic beverages?

Hmm, anything else I need to clarify? Probably. I made no special remark about the wolf, because having faced bears, and even great cats in combat, a wolf is like a giant, grey, long-snouted Pug. Man, I love Pugs!

Ok, well, for now, some parameters to go by, for my guy anyway (here I go again with my obsession with character sheets!):

Relationships with team-mates:
Salem: Wizard, and as such is a novelty. Commands respect and trust.
Duncan: Fellow warrior and also older. Commands respect and admiration. Expect a discussion about combat tactics.
Rethne: Man, I don't like her. She does strike me as fascinating, since a miniature woman is a lot for a young Gladiator emerging from an isolated environment to... umm... digest (No, I won't eat you if you betray us! ). She also commands a certain degree of respect, being older, and a skilled assassin, after all.
Kitty: I like Kitty. She healed my wound, she is close to my age, she is a good person, and she is attractive! Need I say more? I see a lot of potential for friendship, if werebeargoddess sees it that way too.
Phraen: I LOVE PUGS!!!!
Sytze: As a good person, I like him, also as a fellow warrior and a man of age and wisdom. Our relationship was not developed in this edition, but it is definitely positive.

That's it for now, Stan out!
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Old 10-29-2004, 10:15 AM
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A good part GL and a well done to everyone so far!

About the drink, perhaps you missed it, but Rethne was drinking wine, which im pretty damn sure is alcoholic.
I can see why Stanislav is on such bad footings with Rethne, but, her greeting was still quite friendly, if somewhat rash, by many outworlder standards

asriel next then
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Old 10-29-2004, 12:55 PM
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A good part GL and a well done to everyone so far!

About the drink, perhaps you missed it, but Rethne was drinking wine, which im pretty damn sure is alcoholic.
I can see why Stanislav is on such bad footings with Rethne, but, her greeting was still quite friendly, if somewhat rash, by many outworlder standards

asriel next then
Sorry about the drink.
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Old 10-29-2004, 03:39 PM
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Another thing; you might not want to rush the story so much. I had a bit planned for Kitty and me on our way, but that is something I have to skip, I guess.

Maybe I'm the only one who thinks like that and if so, then please correct me
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Old 10-29-2004, 03:53 PM
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I agree with Sytze.

I am slowing the story down now, and exploring some of the character personalities.
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Old 10-29-2004, 05:38 PM
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Another thing; you might not want to rush the story so much. I had a bit planned for Kitty and me on our way, but that is something I have to skip, I guess.

Maybe I'm the only one who thinks like that and if so, then please correct me
Sorry about that . To quote David Chapelle: "I F$@&ed up!"
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Old 10-29-2004, 06:52 PM
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If you like you could write a part and it could be edited in to but after werebeargoddess's last post.

I have no problem with this, considering your one post behind everyone else.
If you are going to pursue this course of action please notifiy the group immediately.

Perhaps this problem could be avoided in the future by contacting the next writer and giving them your ideas about the way that they might write their part.
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Old 10-30-2004, 02:38 AM
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Perhaps this problem could be avoided in the future by contacting the next writer and giving them your ideas about the way that they might write their part.
That is a fairly good idea. Although it will slow the posting process down, I think it will be better for the story. Good idea!

@Lion: no worries mate.
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Old 10-30-2004, 08:16 AM
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That is a fairly good idea. Although it will slow the posting process down, I think it will be better for the story. Good idea!
Good idea, just pm me if you have something you would like me to add to my post.
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Old 10-30-2004, 09:12 PM
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Buzz Buzz!
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Old 10-31-2004, 02:50 PM
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All right, my post is in, sorry for the delay, but here it is anyway. (hey that rhymed )
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