| In an honest critique, the choice of music wasn't the best for the style of action presented, and the end scene with the crossbow just didn't fit at all into the melee style fighting you presented.
However, it wasn't bad, not for a first video that is.
I'd suggest that if you're gonna go with electric guitar and heavy metal type music, go with a band that doesn't throw lyrics together without considering how awful it would be all together. I'm not that into this band, but I will say that Linkin Park has some decent composers among the members. A few songs by Raymond Watts' band PIG, a good deal of Nine Inch Nails songs are good, and maybe Sum 41.
Otherwise not bad for a first try. | 
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