I'm new to the game, and bought the starter set before Gary passed on, and after he died, I felt that, since I bought the game to play, I would pay my respects to him, for all he's done for gaming, and learn to play and start playing. Anywho, I'm working on a human Sorcerer named Dawn, and I'd like some advice on how to go about makeing him, and maybe see if his background in good enough. Let me know what you think, thanks.
Also, I might have misspelled some things.
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As far back as he could remember, he was a lost orphan, found by a family of traveling four Fighters, two male, two females, who traveled around with a young daughter named Destiny. She was two years older than he was, and was the one who found him in a village devastated by an evil dragon, Tiamat. He was the only survivor of the attack, and could remember nothing about how he survived. He traveled around the land with his adoptive family, and saw many sights. She too was adopted, and the three fighters would not tell him anything about her past. As he grew up, he began to have strange experiences along his travels; strange lights, odd sounds, and sudden bursts of strength or other abilities. At one point, he caused the entire camp to levitate, and even Destiny’s skirt. The leader of the family, Anamarya, was the one who suspected that Dawn had the powers of a sorcerer, and that might have been how he survived Tiamat’s assault. She trained him on how to use simple and exotic weapons, so he would be a step ahead on most beginning sorcerer’s, but did not tell him about her suspicions. Destiny often watched him train, and saw him, not as her younger brother, but as her dearest friend, whom she poured her soul into when she needed to. Dawn and Destiny where often seen together. Walking as a group and going on trips into town to gather supplies, Anamarya saw potential for those two in the future. When Destiny was in danger, Dawn would always be there to save her. One day, a month or so after Dawn’s 14th birthday, they celebrated it on the day they found him, one of the male fighters was overtaken by lust, and tried to take Destiny whilst the others slept. Dawn, as he often did, was awake and guarded her, and fought the man. Unfortunately, after the others awoke, the man turned the situation against Dawn. Before the others could enter the room he was in, he ripped Destiny’s gown, and pushed Dawn onto of her. He quickly stabbed his arm, and said that Dawn used sorcery to try and take Destiny. The man threatened her if she didn’t lie, and struck my fear, she told Anamarya that Dawn assaulted her. Dawn had been training in secret to use magic, and fought Anamarya, trying to tell her the truth. By the time he did, the man stabbed her in the chest, and began to kill the others. Dawn stopped his rampage, but not before the man managed to stab Destiny in the heart. Enraged, Dawn held his hand out, and a dragon’s flame engulfed the man. As he died, a dark familiar of Tiamat’s escaped his body. Dawn rushed over to Destiny, and as she lay dying, she gave him an apology, and told him the truth. Destiny was a newly born dragon from Bahamut. His youngest daughter, he saw it safer to hide her as a human. Destiny hid as a human, and lived among the fighters charged to protect her. Dawn saw her eyes change into a brilliant sapphire blue as she kissed his lips. She then infused herself with his body. Dawn felt Destiny’s life begin to slip away, but before he did, she told him that his father passed on dragon blood, and that is how Dawn was granted magical powers. She infused herself with him to pass on the Draconic language to him taught to her by Bahamut himself, and to awaken the dormant magical power within him, normally supposed to increase over puberty, but she felt he needed it now, to be safer. As she finally died, she told him not to cry, and that they would meet again, hinting that he might be reborn as a new being. Alone again, Dawn fell to his knees and began sobbing. Even though he had a family, he always felt isolated and alone when not with Destiny. He cried out her name, hoping, praying to hear her tender voice again, to see her face once more comfort him. In one moment, he let out a single draconic roar. It sent a large amount of magical energy out of him, and the hotel room exploded in a soft blue light. After it faded, Dawn levitated to the ground, surrounded by a blue aura, it slowly shaping a sort of draconic looking armor. As the year passed, Dawn traveled the land, looking for Tiamat or her deciles. One sorcerer saw him one day, and challenged him to a battle. He easily won the battle, and could feel the energy flowing from Dawn. He offered to be his master and teach him the ways of magic. Dawn was no fool. He accepted, and studied under his master, Gargax, for two years. His teacher was often seen as a strict man, and pushed Dawn to his limits, knowing that his powers where still not what they could be. He was brutally honest and open with Dawn. Like other sorcerers, he understood Dawn’s sense of isolation and loneliness. After his 17th birthday, Gargax passed away. Alone again, Dawn knew eventually he’d find Tyamut, and decided to hone his skills. He then began traveling the land again, looking for people to help, and maybe, some to form a traveling group, and hopefully a family, again.
((Thanks Sibeys for the corrections in the name))