| Plot Help
well I have the basic plot down but i think it needs a little fixing. So can anyone here help.
The characters are summoned by a powerful noble in the city. he sends them to kill all the people in a villiage that is refusing to pay the taxes he(the noble) imposed on them..After the characters get there one of the villiage children( about 9yrs old) attack one of them. they easily beat him but he barely esacaped..while returning to the city a tribe of orcs or something attack the group and take them hostage.. after they get free they finnally return only to find all their loved ones dead and a letter telling the group to meet this persone somewhere...well they meet and the assailant reveals himself to be the boy of the villiage they destroyed.(about 19yrs old) he tells them that his master sent him to another plane to get stronger(dif. flow of time there). In the middle of the battle they are teleported to a strange place at the entrance of a large cave. a deity tells them that if they work together and complete the challenges in the cave and then stop a Powerful evil from destroying the world than he will bring back all of there family.
Any and all help will be greatly appreciated!!!
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