[Kipi]

Originally Posted by Woozaii

I read it yesterday, and it really has a lot of potential.

But it is like you just write and submit, don't you check for typos and grammatical errors before hitting 'submit reply'?

And i am just saying this because i really think it is a shame that such a great fanfic story is chipped by something like:



But the story is really really great.

I love Fallout Fanfic, so this is a breath of fresh air for me.

Fix the grammars, but keep writing!

I know, there is so many typos there
I promise to clean up next time I'm able to stay online longer, now I don't have much time since leaving back to base in less than 30 minutes...

Also, the story will continue, I've been working on it at times, I just have had few problems on it (basically, how to get on from the current situation...).
I also try to post new part when I can get to internet next time.