I read it yesterday, and it really has a lot of potential.
But it is like you just write and submit, don't you check for typos and grammatical errors before hitting 'submit reply'?
And i am just saying this because i really think it is a shame that such a great fanfic story is chipped by something like:
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Originally Posted by Kipi  Withing a seconds each one was dead, as he had took them by suprise. Seems like no-one had excepted that he was already inside. |
But the story is really really great.
I love Fallout Fanfic, so this is a breath of fresh air for me.
Fix the grammars, but keep writing!
