| I really don't mean to sound harsh, but I think it's terrible.
For one, it's incredibly juenile, and would likely only be a seller among the immature, so it would be hard to get published; secondly, poorly constructed, you need to think things oer before you write, sketch out a personality for characters, think up a brief past so writing is easier later on; lastly, it's terribly unrealistic, you may need to downsize it a bit.
I'e just looked at the other points and I'e realised that we're all saying pretty much the same thing. Heh. |