LordGothren,
Writing a book is a lot of work and will take you quite awhile. Be prepared to stick with it, and don't give up. I have to second CE's comment on the structure of the writing. You need to bone up on your grammar and use conversation / speech more sparingly.
Regarding the actual content without knowing how you want the book to unfold I can't comment on how it's going so far. But I can point a few things out:
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unfortunantly for nathan he will have to spend 3 hours of it cleaning up toliet paper
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1. In chapter one Jeremey and his mother are in the house getting ready to leave. But at the end you use the name nathan, should that be Jeremey?
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This had been one of jeremey's first and foremost targets and he had a sense that he was going to be spending alot of time here.
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2. This sentence made me believe that Jeremey actually did the prank (if you meant that Jeremey had targetted the Police Station for other pranks be more explicit of when he targetted it).
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Jeremey got out the cleaning materials and started scrubbing away diligently at the toliet.
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3. You seem to be changing Jeremey's personality too much. Earlier you make out that he is irresponsible and naughty, but 10 seconds after someone he hates makes him clean out toilets and he's working diligently? If he really is going to learn a lesson it needs to take longer to happen, and you have to see subtle signs of change before anyone would recognize a difference.
My last comment is that something like this would be very difficult to do unobserved. First, everyone would have to be asleep; no one on the roads, no one watching TV to hear the TP happening to their own house, no dogs barking, etc. Second, places like ATMs, gas stations, police stations, fire departments, jewelery stores and malls have security cameras of their buildings and parking lots. Papering the whole town without a single person or camera noticing you seems very unlikely, so you need to have a good explanation for how they got around this (something as simple as a power outage wouldn't work since that would just get all the city electricians out on the town fixing power stations). Just make sure that however this person accomplished the act isn't too farfetched.
Good luck.