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Originally Posted by Vicsun Since you asked for opinions, I'll tell you what I think is wrong with your poem (hope you don't mind the criticism...) |
thanks for the input... but as i said before, it was a spare of the moment thing... but one thing i forgot to mention was that it was written at 2:00am... i was too tired to think on puncuations and the like (what you mentioned). i'll probally go back and make corections and stuff later and repost the final. consiter this my "ruff draft". thanx again for the input, it was exectly why i posted the poem.
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Originally Posted by Vicsun Do you read poetry? Do you read any that isn't Edgar Allan Poesque?May I recommend you take a look at someone like UA Fanthorpe for a breath of fresh air?  |
maybe i should just read poetry
that would help in writing it, right?
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