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Or did you mean to say that your character could use magic to sense the traps?

Er....that's what I really meant....kind of tried to use bigger words, but they aren't exactly synonymous huh.....

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Mixed tense. Used and didn't, uses and don't.

Right....I have a tendancy to do that

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You just had "used" in your last sentence. Frankly, it's a very generic word; fine for occasional, well, use, but since you've just applied it, try something a little more specific for both variety and focus. Maybe: "Though warriors who didn't wield those few rare weapons they found or purchased--or acquired, through theft and assassination--were often at a disadvantage."

Makes sense....I'll give it an edit

Once again, thanks for the advice Aegis, and Fable.