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Originally posted by Magus
30 pages? I've never gotten a real second opinion of the story, aside from the participants. My own parents are too 'busy' to sit down and give it a shot  Could you provide some criticism? What about it do you think is particulary good? What do think needs some improvement?
I apologize ahead of time if I'm imposing. It's just frustrating sometimes to have so little feedback  |
I have read all of it including Athkatla one...